homework part 1 17-9-2011

Who 3   -  Episode One   -   Pink Revisions   -   07/08/06  - Page 1. Doctor


1 EXT. CITY STREET - DAY 2 0845 1
Rush hour, hundreds of people, but all reduced to a longlens blur foreground & background, to focus on: MARTHA


JONES, walking along.  23, facing another day at work,
just another face in the crowd.  Hold on this.
Then her mobile rings, she recognises the number, and she's
already smiling as she answers -


MARTHA
You're up early!  What's happening?
CONTINUED, INTERCUT WITH -
CUT TO:


2 INT. TISH'S FLAT - DAY 2 0845 2
Bedroom, TISH JONES, 24, running round - a mess, clothes
everywhere.  She's always late.  All on the move:  


TISH
It's a nightmare, cos Dad won't
listen, and I'm telling you, Mum
is going mental, swear to God,
Martha, this is epic, you've got
to get in there and stop him -


MARTHA
Well how do I do that?


TISH
Just tell Dad he can't bring her -
Beep on the phone -


MARTHA
Hold on, that's Leo, call you back -
She clicks the phone -


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3 INT. LEO'S FLAT  - DAY 2 0845 3
Small bedsit.  LEO JONES, 21, bit of a lad, on his mobile. 
In b/g, his GIRLFRIEND & 6 month old BABY.  On the move:


LEO
Martha, if Mum and Dad start kicking
off, tell 'em I don't even want a
party, I didn't even ask for one,
they can give me the money instead -


MARTHA
Yeah, but why do I have to tell
them, why can't you?!


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The slugline: Tells the reader vital information such as where the story is set (its location), what time of day and wheather is in or outside (INT or EXT).  The slugline is also known as the scene heading. In this page there are 3 different sluglines for each different scene, they are all set at the same time of day but are at 3 different locations, to see characters individual stories.


Description: In the script it shows nessasary esstentials the scene needs and the director/producer needs to include to make it how the writer intended. This script is describing 3 different characters - so the actors can understand them in the appropriate way. 


Dialouge: The dialouge is what the actors need to say. It also tells the story of what is happening in each individual scene. It also represents the plot.


Characters: MARTHA, LEO, TISH and JONES are the people that play in this story/plot. They the people that tell the story to the audience.